Monday, February 13, 2012

What is a really good attenion grabbing opening sentence for my article?

Im writing an article on how a water company used false advertising. Basically, they said that if we answered a few questions, they would come to our house to deliver our 4 free movie passes and a coupon for a large pizza. It was a complete hoax. Im having trouble coming up with an opening sentence. suggestions please?What is a really good attenion grabbing opening sentence for my article?
Water company fails to deliver pizza!What is a really good attenion grabbing opening sentence for my article?
The advertising left me thirsty for more, but I got choked on the lies.

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